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Your Frame A Revolution by ~AnimalFeathers:iconAnimalFeathers:



Panic in the streets of Jerusalem as you pull the thin white sheet over your frame and walk to the balcony.  
"They are rioting in the streets again."
I lean back and light the other half of the cigarette I left in the ashtray when you came into the room, dripping from you hair, sweet waters of your skin that stick to the sheets
The white sheet that sticks to your frame,
The white sheet that outlines your ass like the winged victory,
The white sheet with three spots of coffee on the left hand corner,
Not because it was spilt but it was the product of your boredom
You liked to lick your fingers after dipping them in my favorite mug,
The one I sipped from as I admired at the window
Cool breeze of night and inhale - exhale
"Come here before you miss this!"
The violence excites you and I walk towards your green eyes.

Below the scene is bloody.
A man with a rock
A man with a gun
A rock is thrown and a trigger pulled
So many more rocks than guns.

They run towards the barricades and scream in ecstasy!
It is the violent parade of revolution.
©2008-2009 ~AnimalFeathers
:iconanimalfeathers:

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:iconsome-clouddaydreamer:
hmmm.
Oh how I missed your work,
I really like this one, but because of the hour and current state I think I need to read this one multiple times .
Again, I know I probably thank you to much but I feel as if I need to thank you once again for another contemplative, written thought. Well done.
Oh and… I hope you get connected to the internet soon. =)
:iconanimalfeathers:
I am spending all day in the library now so I can work on current projects. This one was an attemptempt at abandoning my current vice of being "literal and appropriate in a literary sense." my work is going to change drastically in this new season I call Nobody:The Explosionist.

MUCHO AMORE = Nicholas

--
"Let's just say I was testing the bounds of reality. I was curious to see what would happen. That's all it was: just curiosity." - Jim Morrison
:iconsome-clouddaydreamer:
Alas, personal vices are viewed differently than yourself, and tend only be recognized by the few people who either share the same vice, or have had similar or outside experiences with it. As for the drastic changes soon to come, I have to say; although I do love your past work, I’m amused and insatiably curious regarding what’s in store.
Hoping to read from you soon,
<3
Arielle
:iconxxuglyducklingxx:
Impressive. Great imagery and a great talent. Keep writing =P

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